Monday, 22 February 2016

Audience Rough Cut Feedback

After we had done a rough cut of our opening, we showed it to a small audience who watched it and then responded to it. These responses included things like what they liked about it, what they disliked about it and what we should improve. 

One of the things people liked about our opening was the location. We decided to film our opening in the woods. A wood is a secluded area and not many people would be in the woods. This would make the audience automatically recognise the setting as an isolated location and know that something bad is about to happen. Also, our audience liked the fact we used teenage actors rather than older actors.

Our audience didn’t like that our opening was set in daylight and would have found it more interesting if it were shot when it was dark. They commented as well about how our footage was shaky and in some scenes it was hard to see what was going on because of this issue.

One of our questions was “what should we improve to make our opening?” One person said that we should use filters to make our clip more attention-grabbing rather than being dull. The acting needs more believable. Another person added that we should use a better script. They stated that the script was ‘boring’ and it’s too typical and the audience would want to see something different.


We will take this into consideration and make sure our final cute meets up to our audiences’ expectations.

Sunday, 21 February 2016

Shot List

Shot 1 - Time lapse of sunset, establishing shot to show the time of day and show where the film is set. Production company/director/producers

Shot 2 - Long shot of friends in a circle sitting around a campfire. Laughing and joking

Shot 3 - Close up pan of people’s faces laughing and joking around

Short 4 - Close up of roasting marshmallows (popping & sizzling)

Shot 5 - Mid shot of 3 of the friends, one friend suggests telling ghost stories, some people disagree, suggesting that they won’t be able to sleep

Shot 6 - Pan of woods, forest noises in background

Shot 7 - Extreme close up on one of the friends’ mouth telling ghost story. “Once upon a time there lived… *gasp* did you hear that?”

Shot 8 - Mid shot of the friends disagreeing

Shot 9 - Friend carries on with the story

Shot 10- Cut from the friends sitting around the fire to the villains shoes.

Shot 11 - From villains shoes pans up (low angle) looking up towards the villain.

Shot 12 - Extreme close up of the villains black boots walking towards the friends. (Loud footsteps, behind)


Shot 13- Last foot step the villain come to a stop and then screen appears black with a sudden bang then the title of the film appears on screen.

Opening Sequence Pitch

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